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Soft hands to caress my hair...
Gentle lips to kiss my face...
Strong arms to embrace and protect...
...But only in my dreams.

Sweet love to give me hope...
Burning passion to ignite the flame...
Blissful intimacy to warm my soul...
...But only in my dreams.

Falling forever into blackness...
Stumbling eternally through the dark...
Living a lifetime of lonely depression...
...Why is love only part of a dream?
©2005-2009 =saffyre-onyx
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I'm not sure what category this belongs in....

Lastnight I had a dream about David (one of my first and deepest infatuations).
This poem was inspired by that dream, because the dream reminded me of the way he made me feel for four or five months back when i was living in the shelter.
The first half of *lovelorn's scrap "Poetically Speaking" [link] are quotes from a conversation we had about him.

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:iconchains2379:
hey thats really good
:tmnt3:

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jessy
:iconchains2379:
any time u have really good 1s
:tmnt3:

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jessy
:iconlivingparadox:
I love you... and that isn't a dream

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"The body may bleed, even if the soul feels whole."

"And through the ashes of the phoenix we are given a second chance."
:iconsaffyre-onyx:
i love you too.

Like i said in my description, i wrote this while thinking about the way he used to make me feel.
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Wow, that's really good!
:icongartoss:
wow looks like summin id write! haha. but seriously tho its really really good! i only wish i could make a girl feel like that.....

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"Why are you still alive?!"
"Because God and the Devil don't want me."
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Soft hands to caress my hair...
Gentle lips to kiss my face...
Strong arms to embrace and protect...
...But only in my dreams.

I'd swear this is really subconciously about Jon and your fear of something going wrong.

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[link] <---- Give Sihn a :hug:
:iconsaffyre-onyx:
...maybe when i started writing it. But as i wrote it reminded me more of David.

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