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I'll Be Fine by =saffyre-onyx:iconsaffyre-onyx:



Looking back at those few days
I feel the shame
Like a tidal wave.
Memories of his gentle embrace...
The stinging tears
Stream down my face.
Why can't I get over it?
I think of him
and I feel like shit,
As if my heart is in a vice
Being squeezed and bled,
And at what price?
I gave him a piece of this battered soul
In exchange for a tender touch
That took a toll
On what was left of my pride
So now I look
At what's inside
This bitter, wounded spirit of mine
And wonder if I'm lying to you
When I say that I'll be fine.
©2005-2009 =saffyre-onyx
:iconsaffyre-onyx:

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:iconginicumberdale:
I so feel you !!
its good :)
:iconlivingparadox:
all that means is that your battered soul has some open wounds that need tending to. "the body may bleed even if the soul feels whole", the same can be said in reverse, sometimes it's just easier to deal with the bleeding of the body. It's far easier to tend to the body then to the soul, but I'll find a way.

--
"The body may bleed, even if the soul feels whole."

"And through the ashes of the phoenix we are given a second chance."
:iconarchmagesynok:
Damn I wish I'd written this, except with the gender switched around:). Very good. :+fav:

--
Simon Tamm-"How do I know you won't kill me in my sleep?"
Malcolm Reynold- "You don't know me so I'll say this once, if I kill you, you'll be awake, you'll be facing me, and you'll be armed."
:iconex1:
. . .*sigh*

You'll be fine. . .*eyes water just a bit*...you're strong enough.

You just might not know it yet...*shakes head*

--
Death before dishonor. [link]

~Ex1
:iconnervous-thursdays:
if you have poetry slams, you should slam this one.

--
time, they say is the great healer




but I believe in chemicals, baby.

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